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The Darkened Streets

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nightcrafter27:
Something I wrote in my free time.

The city that was once forlorn, whose streets
So foreboding, lonely, lost, lifeless. They
Plead for a friend, a lover. I have found
Myself trapped inside the city walls, and
Now I do not want to leave, having come
To love the things I had so recently
Feared.  True, my friends have dangers, but it is
Worth the trepidation to learn of their
Secrets. Wonderful mysteries of a
World deserted of its inhabitants.

Imppa:
+KFY.

...I sense the feel of New Mombasa here. Hm.

Pulse Cloud:
Is this Scat telling us he found... THE SWORD!?

Scatcycle:

--- Quote from: Pulse Cloud on February 15, 2011, 20:35:26 ---Is this Scat telling us he found... THE SWORD!?

--- End quote ---
That's Night... :/

This + ODST music is epic.

But what are the friends?

Also, I noticed how you capitalized secrets :3

nightcrafter27:

--- Quote from: Scatcycle on February 15, 2011, 23:08:33 ---
--- Quote from: Pulse Cloud on February 15, 2011, 20:35:26 ---Is this Scat telling us he found... THE SWORD!?

--- End quote ---
That's Night... :/

This + ODST music is epic.

But what are the friends?

Also, I noticed how you capitalized secrets :3

--- End quote ---

I'll let you figure that out. Also, I was writing in iambic pentameter (10 syllables per line), and secrets just got pushed to the next line. And to follow proper form, I capitalized the first word of each line.

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